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About Me Member General Poet olafolken24/United Kingdom Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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Tue Jul 22, 2008, 6:28 AM
After a brief hiatus, I am again trying my hand at writing poetry. Any suggestions on how to improve would be welcome.

  • Listening to: EBM
  • Reading: A reader in Anthropology
  • Watching: Casino Royale
  • Eating: Pizza
  • Drinking: Whisky

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:iconlauranikky:
it's a comment.

Poetry does tend to get overlooked, but on the plus side, dA never tells you how much Tony Danza loves your work......

Anyway. I'll have to look at more of your poems. Down To The River was good. :)

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-Laura Nicole
:iconolafolken:
Thank you! If you have any criticism I'd welcome it.

Positive or negative.
:iconopaquediaphanousness:
Hi, thanks for reading :) Poetry and lit deviants on here tend to get ignored with all the pretty pictures around, so don't worry if it seems slow :shrug: I read your poems, and they will get more attention with some patience! :nod:
:icondeikin:
Hi Andrew, welcome to DA. (This is Olly by the way).

I'm not a big fan of poetry as you know, and therefore not too experienced at reading it and understanding the subtleties of stanza structure, tempo and other poetical rules. Still, I'll give 'em a read.

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